Deleting Bisi?

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Abike

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#21
Disu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sweat:

Alakoba! :roll



One question Victor abeg are you going to hold an audition? why am i asking? it will be good if you could screen out the people that cannot pronounce "text message" and any other grammar that you will eventually have in the movie
 

samira

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#22
I am not really sure whether it was a good move to have posted the syno of a script that is still in it's first draft,Mr Aghahowa.
You better start praying that idumota boys do not hijack it and bring out a homvie with the same concept in the coming few weeks.These guys don't write scripts in many drafts,you know.

As for the title,it sounds ok to me.It is relevant to the concept of the story.
hmmm oga vince, i was thinking like toi ooo...but oh well
 
#28
I am very impressed and I think you my brother Sanchez is gonna go places with this great brain of yours!
God bless and I think this tittle is already good enough. Like the rest am just an economist but since I love film making and am probably heading that way I would say, you are doing great brotha.
 
#31
Diverters, if una no get title, waka!!:box

Ehen ojare, Mr Sanchez, I gotta few ideas for you. Feel free to use or discard as u wish. All others, if u laff ehn:1087:

1) One long hour
2) A few crazy shenanigans

If you want to play to the humorous side of things:

1)Wahala dey o
2)Technological error.
3) Oooooooops!


By the way, This ya Sanchez name - u be half spanish? No vex o, na curiousity dey do moi. Ehen, carry on.


I will keep thinking and updating both categories of titles.
Hey, u wey dey laff, wey ya own??:devil
 
#33
Diverters, if una no get title, waka!!:box

Ehen ojare, Mr Sanchez, I gotta few ideas for you. Feel free to use or discard as u wish. All others, if u laff ehn:1087:

1) One long hour
2) A few crazy shenanigans

If you want to play to the humorous side of things:

1)Wahala dey o
2)Technological error.
3) Oooooooops!


By the way, This ya Sanchez name - u be half spanish? No vex o, na curiousity dey do moi. Ehen, carry on.


I will keep thinking and updating both categories of titles.
Hey, u wey dey laff, wey ya own??:devil
Funmo nawa oh this nollywood heat dey enter you o...

What about... plain and simple THE VIDEO! or to take it naijaen lets say BECAUSE OF BISI we can even take deep... (strong accent) BISI PORARO!

poraro means problem it is pronounced the same as tomato (naija tomato that is)
 

Field Marshal

ABSOLUTE SUPREME RULER
#34
What's up people? The Synopsis - as promised

Pardon me if it's a little raw - am taking the advice someone sent and trying to say as little as possible

SYNOPSIS
Wande borrows a high end phone from his girlfriend (Vivica) to impress his new mistress (Bisi). She is impressed - a little too impressed and a 'naughty' video gets recorded on the phone. and then accidentally the phone gets sent back to Vivica with the video still on it! Now Wande has one hour to chase that phone down and delete that video before it enters Vivica's hands! And against all odds, somewhere along the way, he manages to find the true meaning of the term 'growing up'...


oKAY - that's all I got for now - on a side note - just finished the first draft polish - the script is officially done! BELLS! WHISTLES! CYMBALS! where the hell is my flute?

hey, thanks for the heads up - i had no idea Nollywood was doing the 'Slapping Tunde' thing, LOL. and to think I had a rough first draft of DB back in 2004

Any help with titles will be vastly appreciated, thouhg I will admit, I still LOVE Deleting Bisi - but i'll also admit I'm in no position to be objective, I've had it in the back of my head for four years!

Know what? Whoever gives me a TRULY great title? I'll use your name in the movie - use any good line you can give me - AND send you a few pages as an exclusive peek (don't take it the wrong way, am not on an ego trip - would love to send you cash, but am sinking a lotta cash into making sure this film makes 'Letters' look like a student demo)

Till I post again - THANK YOU as always

hey, how come Atlakos hasn't hollered at me yet? Come to think of it, haven't seen her on the board recently either...

anyhow, am off to soak my arthritic knuckles - writing ain't easy! LOL

take care all

Victor Sanchez Aghahowa
VSA, based on the highlighted above the Title should be "CRITICAL ERROR"
 

sidney

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#35
Wait a minute! I have seen a Hollywood movie very similar to this! It was called Road Trip!

Plot Outline: Four friends take off on an 1800 mile road trip to retrieve an illicit tape mistakenly mailed to a girl friend...

I liked it.. Very funny! Although this would be more like a high school buddy flick then "Deleting Bisi"...
 

KikisMuffin

I no get ya time!!
#36
Keep "DELETING"..its relevant to the storyline and people will get it when they watch it.it's ctachy keep it, its better than most stupid titles around!
 

saymamy

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#37
Love d story line.As 4 d title, I'll thinks abourrit.

What about Bisi Deleted, sounds better to me.
so many orisirisi titles will start to dey flow in........Bisi deleted?why not Bisi saved.

Now dat was very funny.sweat:
 
#38
Wait a minute! I have seen a Hollywood movie very similar to this! It was called Road Trip!

Plot Outline: Four friends take off on an 1800 mile road trip to retrieve an illicit tape mistakenly mailed to a girl friend...

I liked it.. Very funny! Although this would be more like a high school buddy flick then "Deleting Bisi"...
What are you implying? smokin:

Mr aghahowa do you happen to own a copy of road trip?
 

peculiar

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#40
Diverters, if una no get title, waka!!:box

Ehen ojare, Mr Sanchez, I gotta few ideas for you. Feel free to use or discard as u wish. All others, if u laff ehn:1087:

1) One long hour
2) A few crazy shenanigans

If you want to play to the humorous side of things:

1)Wahala dey o
2)Technological error.
3) Oooooooops!



By the way, This ya Sanchez name - u be half spanish? No vex o, na curiousity dey do moi. Ehen, carry on.


I will keep thinking and updating both categories of titles.
Hey, u wey dey laff, wey ya own??
:bouncyMy sister, you know i loff you...betti...chei! These your titles highlighted above here na hot waya ooo!!!sweat:
 
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